DEVIL IN WHITE
The innocent frolics of a devious mind…
The naïve look of numbing eyes…
The paradoxical Devil in White
The naïve look of numbing eyes…
The paradoxical Devil in White
She laughs like a child, her voice carrying me back in time. Wears a halo of fire…carrying in it mortal desires. She wraps herself in a robe of virtues yet flies using the wings of pleasure. The fire of lust and the holy water of redemption. Bathes in wine and preaches temperance.
She melts me in a moment…craving for more. Envious of her boisterous followers and addicted to her soothing words. The unmatched confidence and the childlike purity. Those flowing hair are not my bed of roses, but a trap to take my resistance. That delicate body is not mine to touch yet I yearn…
…falling to the mesmerizing ways of the Devil in White.
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45 Letters to Mayank :
oh! you saw her!??
don't roam around in the night, Mayank :)
....Bathes in wine and preaches temperance. -- my favourite line! :)
btw, did you read that news about a year ago ...there was a devil in white in Delhi roads..many call centre guys saw her...and finally with the help of police caught 'her' -- who turned out to be a man! :)
and in this poem, I am failing to understand why yearn for this devil??
wishes,
devika
mayank!
u r a magician..
you can make the words(and thus the reader) dance to your tunes and create pure magic..
ROFL@bathes in wine and preaches temperance!
:D:D:D
I am sorry to say mayank but your muse for this post is a hypocrite then!:P
Bathes in wine eh?
The wine lady? :P
Good post :)
@devika
lol...kya comparison tha!!
nah nah m pretty sure my devil is a woman!! hehehehe!!
**I am failing to understand why yearn for this devil??
everyone yearns for d devil maa...
@prachi
**I am sorry to say mayank but your muse for this post is a hypocrite then!:P
my muse is jus a tease ;)
thnku so much :)
@anamika
devil in disguise :)
ye kaha kaha se...sochte ho?:P..
Aha, theres a story behind this composition?
hmmm..
I have met the one in black and the one in red... but never the one in white...
am gonna seek her out in my world :P
lol...
take care bro... cheers...
You sure have a way with words :)
Keep writing :)
Cheers!!!
only one question i ask you- where do you get these thoughts from?? :P
i mean koi greek god has hit his wand on ur head personally?? :P
YOU are a magician with WORDS.
*Holy Bow*
Wah wah wah... Mashallah! :D
Lol @ Richa's comment...
OH MAYANK TAKE CARE,otherwise all are will going to loss very precious one(u), just fun
nice discovery
@amrita
arrey yehi toh trade secret hai...
@rakesh
thr always is bro :)
@arv
m not too sure u'll find d one in white in ur world
@kido
thnku :)
@richa
**i mean koi greek god has hit his wand on ur head personally?? :P
nah a greek goddess has kissed me personally :D
@aayushi
*bows back* :)
@dhanya
shukriya :)
@usirae
huh??
Beautiful..!! :) i didnt knew that devil exist in white too...
specialy loved those last lines..
oooh! who is miss erotica?
@devil
ah yesss she does...well she does like to deceive us
@rush
the devil in white :D
wow...that was so..umm wat is the wrd i m looking for here...touching..naah .. umm..lovely...naaah...yeah..that was very sensuous...u write really well :)
never want to see the devil...anyways hun
please change your links to my blog to www.kinshar7067.blogspot.com
I guess Bacchus himself has blessed you. Drunk with thoughts. :)
Keep 'em, coming, mate...
Peace.
Beautiful really :)
This reminded me of MOHINI PISASU :P pisasu = devil :P
it seemed a *hot* night ;)
The Devil exists in our every deep DESIRE :)
Nice one Mayz!
Keshi.
@shanu
ahhh i like ur choice of words...jus hope d muse agrees to it :)
thnku so much :)
@sharon
okie :)
@kartz
ah this time bachu had lil to do wid my drunk state of mind...d blame goes totally to d devil in white :)
@sowmi
ummmm neva heard of mohini pisasu...will wiki it up
@mermaid
dnt kno wat to say to that
@keshi
thats true n exactly d jist of this post :)
thnku so much :)
She disarms me by just being:)
Royal...very royal
dunno why but this actually made me imagine a goddess, perfectly curved, wearing a white gown...someone who has natural beauty and isn't wearing 10lbs of make-up...
and i have not shifted yet...it will take another 4 months :(
u take care
i mite not be able to come online for sometime :(
will surely miss your posts
hugs and love :)
sometimes i juss dunno wat to say..u juss put it so very well..
i juss feel lyk explorin this side of life more ;)
heyy i guess u shud do the tag I tagged u for :P
Wow wht an amazing description...she looks like right out of a fairy tale. :) Sometimes i feel u belong to some magical world...coz ur posts r so magical.
Mayank! this was really hot! I enjoyed every word and every line of This!!
I LOVE IT Sweetie!
Ne
@saim
ahhh well said bro :)
@priya
yeah i like that tag...gonna take it up on my blog itself :)
@issh
a goddess eh...looks like she deceived u as well jus as she deceived me wid her innocent questions n virtues...
but i agree...perfectly curved, natural beauty in white...
@ria
yeah i guess she is d princess of a fairy tale coz i think god stopped makin girls like her
@nehya
thnku so much :)
M still wondering... what made you write that....
though its good... flowery... beautifuly written.. :)
Same question yet again.. hw do u manage this??
You are amongst the very few who knw how to make the best of words... and how to put life into them... :)
LOL@ Devika's comment...
BEAUTIFUL! Mayz , really fabulous! :)
How do you dooooo it??? kya secret hai? ;-)
I never knew Devils exist in whites too :D
should i say- lucky devil in white ?
:P
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